Scanned Picture

[Kyo**Miki Hamaguchi**Rin[temp]]

I recently drew this picture and even though I was unable to get the whole picture onto it and some parts are cut out because of how light I drew it. I was wondering what other people thought of it. This is my first actually attempt with my new drawing style. So please rate.
[Btw I know the hand sucks. I'm still working on how to draw them]
[other: I'm working on taking out all the paper lines now, that ones that were from the notebook paper.]